Writer's Journal #12

I guess the think I need to work more for this text is inspiration and giving it a personal perspective. It was a very powerful way of watching what I wrote from an outsider perspective and gave me a good way to see what I wrote outside my own scope or assessment. The draft needs to be revisited and I will work a bit more in giving it a more personal perspective and opinion to it and not making it such and standard, cold analysis.

Re read the document, check for new material and source information, and give it a more personal approach, ad multimodal elements.